My take on breast size (with approximate examples and discarding the double letters, DD, GG...)
A-wesome although a bit scarce. Debbie.
B-eing this amazing, I have no complaints. Scarlett.
C-an I have a taste? Most of the girls
D-essert. Apply the above sentence. Norah.
E-nticing... but can you stop growing?. I don't know if Saira belongs here or to DD.
G-ood, but stop here, please. Betty.
H-ave you visited your doctor about your back issues? I wouldn't turn you down because of your breast size, I even can act as a hands-bra, but you are beyond my type.
Thanks for the reply.
I get that you dont controel their fantasies but you also just said its not her fantasy she just think its MCs fantasy and thats why she says it at the game and seeing him turn down 2 girls kissing shouldent that make her aware that its proberly not MCs thing, or maybe shes not that smart haha

But fair enough man, i really just wanted to ask about the image since it shouldent show her kissing another girl if shes 100% stright so that image really did make me wonder about her, hope you will get that fixed this time even if it is a small thing for the overall game
Scarlett's fantasy is to get her perceived MC's fantasies done (being involved in them, obviously). At that moment, the only thing the MC did was not teach them together, and Scarlett thinks that it was because he didn't want to kiss his cousin. If she thought the MC's fantasy had anything to do with a girl and a horse, her fantasy would have involved a horse.
At that moment you still haven't blocked lesbian content, so that image is correct story and playthrough-wise. My mistake was to add that image without knowing the level of lesbian haters in this forum that would see a lesbian relationship in two girls saying "hello" to each other. You can't know how much development time I lost answering questions about that image or the kissing lessons.
I think my biggest issue is that everything is just sooo sugar sweet, just to much of a young girls teen romance novel with 0 drama or guess i should say 0 action when small dramas happens, so i never get to say what i really want to say to the characters, like being mad at the mother for what she did....
Fortunately, the MC has his own personality and you can take some of his choices, but not change his behavior upside down. The MC is an extremely caring person for his family. He doesn't get mad if he can talk things out. He will get mad when the moment comes and he should defend his family (regardless of paths). He won't ever impose his views (besides the "no other guys" rule, and he regrets it because it's not needed) on women.
You think that's a "wet noodle" (nudle in your words) personality. I think it's a civilized one.
I really hate the kissing everybody thing too. It felt really weird for girls that I had turned down to suddenly be kissing them. I spoke to Trope at the time and he assured me it wouldn't go on for very long.
Yesterday I wrote the scene that ends it all.
I wish i had more free time, because I'd love to help with some of the syntax errors and such. Obviously English isn't your first language but you've done a really great job in trying to localize it. But the way some of the conversations flow and words that are used just isn't correct. Again really well done, just not accurate always.
Also, are you planning on there being like a small time hop to get to the Fall semester or
I ask because I imagine some things will have settled for the rest of the summer semester after all that's happened up till now. And I can't imagine going through another 30+ days without dev time taking 10 years LOL!
I work with some American proofreaders (
sagerock820 being the main one) who are doing an amazing job. He got the game when it already had six chapters, so the proofreading of the first chapters wasn't as good as it should be.
There will be a time skip from August to February (they are still in 2023) before the Autumn semester during the Aruba trip.
It took 2 years and 4 months to write 21 days, so your 10 years comparison wasn't too wrong
I love that you guys KNOW that some of the stuff is a bit Cliche and that you essentially have the characters break the 4th wall and say things are cliche and such. Adds a good bit of humor to the game while at the same time saying "yeah yeah, we know this trope has been done/said" but keeping it your own.
The problem with AVNs is that there are 19,000 (on this site). It's hard to surprise the players in every update. You can do twists, but not base the story on twists, so the clichés should be used. Also, I haven't played 19,000 games (not even 19), so whatever I come up with has a high chance of having been used previously in another game (or a lot of games), becoming cliches without me being aware of it. How they are used, though, is what changes how players see the tropes. For example, the MC didn't catch any of the girls in the shower, but he was caught a lot of times. Doing it once would be cliche. Doing it multiple times becomes a running joke.
The mother scene dosent feel importen to me, maybe at a later time i have no clue since im not there yet and first time playing it, it feels like a pure mother scene that has no place to be there when your not on her route, no one should touch an MCs dick without being on her route and if such thing happens MC should be mad and make damn sure it dosent happen again no matter if the mother gets a little uncomfortable, not saying he should blow up but he should set her stright right away, thats better then it happening again or giving her falsh hope for things that will never happen, now that would be a considerate human being, like MC thinks to himself, hes tierd of never talking about things but even so he still dosent talk or put things right he just says sorry.....not much of a talk.
And to me he does have 0 backbone and feels like a wet nuddle when he cant get mad or even talk seriously about something that he dosent want and when MC instend says sorry? hes even worse then a wet nuddle, you might look at it diffent but thats life we dont all see things the same way.
Also it wasent a subconsciously thing she did, she desided to touch hes dick multiple times after waking up knowing MC wouldent want it since she thinks hes against incest at that time which makes it even more worng for her to do it, so ofcause she should be told so.
Also MC went from being concerned about nudity to being fine with it out of nowhere, he went from putting on hes pants knowing hes mother would walk in to check on him to nude in a hearth beat, which also dident make any kind of sense in my eyes when not on her route.
So yes i hated that part and hate the wet nuddle MC personalty, but i love the choices, some of the other girls and the stories with them and i love incest games just not mother/son, but sister/daughter.
The bold part is what shows a difference between you and the MC. He won't ever make uncomfortable any of his girls (and with "his" I'm talking people he loves, not people he fucks). At the end of that day, without making her uncomfortable, the issue is solved, so his system is better than yours when it comes to peaceful coexistence with the girls he's not in a relationship.
I guess your definition of backbone is to impose your views on women. Mine is to be able to care, defend, and make the girls feel good even if they are rejected. Or, at least, not making them feel bad.
My thoughts from this update
It will be the last update focused on the DnD game, don't worry. We won't see the characters until the epilogue.
I dont mind spoilers about the mother since i couldent care less about her when it comes to sexual relationships, but i sure hope there wont be more of the mother or Nora in any sexual ways or them playing with hes dick, i turned both down for a reason and thats due to not wanting to have any sexual things with them and i hope thats also why you can turn them down permanently or it wouldent make sense, it would most defently not be something i would expect in the future since game as i see it is not about forced stuff.
On a side note, i dont hate Martha in any way so its not like i mind MC and her having a good mother/son relationship, thats perfectly fine, just not sexual and same goes for Nora for that matter
What Dr. meant about the spoilers isn't just about Martha, but about family dynamics and the MC's opinion about them. Some actions are hard to understand when they happen because the reader doesn't have all the information (on purpose). The family dynamics are still evolving in 0.20 and that scene was in 0.7, so any spoiler should be a long one explaining every step of the evolution.
One thing i hated and i know most proberly dosent, but changing Scarlett into what to me looked like a rich bitch type girl look wise on the date night (and going forward) really put me off since she no longer looked like the girl i loved to see doing the hole first part, with the hair covering a bit of her eyes giving her that shy personalty and look.
i totaly understand its to show her making progress and growing up and all that shit but to me game lost that one shy cute looking girl who was proberly my personal favorit and gained just another run of the mill standard looking short haired girl like so many others, theres just nothing special about her anymore which annoyed me alot, with her new looks i would proberly have turned her down just like i did with Lisa but with Lisa its proberly more about the first impression she left which is to hard to change, just rememeber this is a personal taste thing not ment as a complaint against the game, i just dident like it.
And how i would have loved to tell Scarlett i hated her new look instend of again being overly nice
Scarlett went through 3 hairstyle changes. You hated the last one, other players hated the first one. Not even Iberian Ham can please everyone. If you told her you hated the new hairstyle, that would mean she would return to her old one, and that would mean double-rendering every scene she's on. Who would be doing all those renders? How much would the updates be delayed for it?
You HAVEN'T turned down Lisa. You haven't had the chance to do it yet.